Rough Copy

Rough copy

Currently we are in the process of editing our movie. We have created a rough copy which we have uploaded to YouTube and will ask for audience feedback on ways of improvement. Of course there is still no soundtrack or titles as of yet. We also know that we need to edit some of the shots further but this is how far we are at this moment at time and would appreciate feedback hence the reason of us uploading it.

 We presented our rough cut to our media class as well as teachers and peers, we were given feedback on numerous areas:

• A few shots are a bit too long (Recurring piece of feedback) Especially shots of Tariq walking to the office.
• Need to add in more titles.
• Need a good soundtrack to make this piece effective.
• Re-order some of the shots.
• Some shots need to be edited more smoothly.
• There is something missing from this piece, look at after effects.

We will take on this feedback and aim to edit our thriller opening.