Rough copy

Rough Copy Alteration 

I posted my rough copy a few days ago and showed it to peers and teachers. With the feedback that I mentioned I have edited my Thriller opening. I have shortened down some shots, particulalry the ones of Tariq entering his office. I feel this feedeback was very important in making our Thriller more effective. The pace has been picked up making it more typical to the Thriller genre. I have also had another go on after effects and have edited another scene. Theis scene was one of Andrew walking. I put this shot into after effects added a balck and white filter and a timecode and date resembling CCTV like footage. I feel this has strengthened my opening in making it seem mroe Thrilling and appeal to my audience further as it looks more professional and high tech.